tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10340303.post111280290487904995..comments2023-10-23T12:07:07.188-05:00Comments on D is for Lisdexington: Morning Commute: Entry Twenty-Five:Found in the Alleyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05266302954855712342noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10340303.post-1112879544597637842005-04-07T08:12:00.000-05:002005-04-07T08:12:00.000-05:00Always the rebel.Always the rebel.Justinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05597989245768144781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10340303.post-1112818396848669582005-04-06T15:13:00.000-05:002005-04-06T15:13:00.000-05:00Yours is a literal interpretation of the form prom...Yours is a literal interpretation of the form promulgated by the sluggish elementary teachers of your youth, not in tune to the true essence of haiku which keeps in mind simplicity and rhythm (i.e. seventeen syllables in Japanese [due to the multi-syllabic-ness of the language] delivers, on average, about the equivalent of eleven English syllables).Found in the Alleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05266302954855712342noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10340303.post-1112807080590167472005-04-06T12:04:00.000-05:002005-04-06T12:04:00.000-05:003-5-3 is wrong5-7-5 is haikuno dessert for you3-5-3 is wrong<BR/>5-7-5 is haiku<BR/>no dessert for youJustinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05597989245768144781noreply@blogger.com